Transactions in Thai - Escapade en Thaïlande

Here's the first page of my short story "Transactions  in Thai" translated into French by Jérôme Bouchaud as "Escapade en Thaïlande".  Previously, I posted a link to extracts from the story from thr French blog that was set up by éditions GOPE for Trois autres Malaisie, the French translation of Lovers and Strangers Revisited.

Escapade en Thaïlande, Robert Raymer, éditions GOPE.  Cet inédit vient en complément de Trois autres Malaisie.

Escapade en Thaïlande
Le gérant du Kingman Hotel de Hat Yai scrutait les deux Occidentaux. Échoués dans le hall d’entrée, ils lisaient un journal en diagonale, discutant de leurs projets en attendant que le déluge s’arrête. Ils s’avéraient être américains, mais ils auraient tout aussi bien pu être australiens, britanniques ou allemands. Leur nationalité exacte importait peu : ils étaient occidentaux. La couleur de leur peau pouvait donc être exploitée, par eux-mêmes et par les autochtones…

Flairant la bonne affaire, le gérant – un Thaïlandais mince et affable que les deux hommes avaient déjà rencontré à quelques reprises dans le hall – s’approcha d’eux le sourire aux lèvres. Il plaisanta au sujet de la pluie et rit de sa propre blague. Les deux hommes restèrent de marbre, l’examinant même avec une forte dose de soupçon – comme ils l’auraient fait avec tout autre Asiatique les approchant sans raison apparente. Il se présenta sous le nom de Jek et voulut savoir s’ils avaient besoin de ses services. Tandis qu’ils écoutaient son boniment, leur attention s’égarait de temps en temps vers les autres clients de l’hôtel, des Malaisiens pour la plupart à en juger par les journaux qu’ils lisaient ou leur apparence. Ces derniers – qu’ils fussent malais, chinois ou indiens – venaient ici pour les massages, les prestations

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Copyright © Robert Raymer 2008. Titre original : Transactions in Thai
Copyright © Éditions GOPE, mars 2011, pour la version française
Traduit de l’anglais (États-Unis) par Jérôme Bouchaud
www.troisautresmalaisie.blogspot.com – troisautresmalaisie@gmail.com

*Here is the Story Behind the Story of "Transactions in Thai".  Here is the Story Behind the Story to all 17 stories from Lovers and Strangers Revisited.  All but three of the stories will be in the French translation, Trois autres Malaisie.

**Update, the 20th anniversary of Lovers and Strangers Revisited, my collection of short stories set in Malaysia

***Update: Book orders for Trois autres Malaisie.   E-book orders.  Or recommend it to your friends, especially those who would like to know more about Malaysia or have an interest in Southeast Asia.

  

Here's a link to the intro and excerpts, and to four reviews of Trois Autres Malaisie in eurasie.net, Malaisie.org, easyvoyage.com, and Petit Futé mag.

****Here’s an update to the French blog about Trois autres Malaisie and my meeting the French translator Jerome Bouchaud in Kuching, and my involvement in a French documentary for Arte (June 2017) on The Sensual Malaysia of Somerset Maugham.

“Transactions in Thai”: The Story Behind the Story of Lovers and Strangers Revisited

For about ten years, starting in 1985 I had to leave Malaysia every three months, so I would alternate between Singapore and Thailand. Long before I had ever been to Thailand, I had heard the stories about the prostitutes, about how travelers would fall in love with them and even marry them. How visitors would extend their visits from one or two weeks to several years, and this went all the way back to the Vietnam War. They say, jokingly, there are no real Missing in Action from the Vietnam War; they’re still living in Thailand!  That's pretty close to the truth.

In 1992, during one of my trips to Had Yai in southern Thailand, while staying at the King’s Hotel, I was having breakfast and catching up in my journal, when I observed these two Western men in their forties being befriended by the Thai manager. I knew what was going on, since the manager had approached me on numerous occasions, and I thought there’s a story here. Since I didn’t have any spare paper with me, I turned to the back of the journal and started writing the story out. It was one of the fastest stories I had ever written. Maybe because I was so familiar with not only the setup, but also the background knowledge of the working girls in Thailand, the expats and Malaysians coming up to Had Yai, and had even seen, at the behest of one of van drivers that plied the Penang/Had Yai route, a Tiger or Thai Girl show and the startling feats that the Thai women performed with their vagina.

So when I began to write the story it came easily. For one, I was in the actual setting of the story and from my table I could casually observe and describe first hand the characters, the Thai manager, the two men, and then the arrival of the two girls. I could observe the waitress who served them beer since she was the same woman who served me breakfast, and from my table I had an excellent view of the elevator, of the girls leaving with their dainty overnight bags. It was all there, and all I had to do was to piece the story together and imagine what they were saying. If I could only hear their actual words, it would’ve made my job even easier, but they were sitting at a different section from mine. But I had enough to go on to write out the story, at least the first rough draft while eating breakfast. Not a bad way to start the day!

“Transactions in Thai”, as all stories do, did require a lot of revising before it finally fell into place. I even managed to work in my presence into the story. An issue I did wrestle with was dialogue, should I make it direct or keep it indirect as it appeared in EM (Malaysia) in 1996. Later, while rewriting it, I added in some direct dialogue, though most of it remained indirect, which I thought better suited the mood of the story.

Long before I submitted it for the Silverfish New Writing 7 (2008), I realized I only had half the story told. I stopped way too soon, after the two men had bought the bus tickets. To make the story more effective, I needed to have the men think about this transaction they just made in terms of their marriages, in terms if their children, in terms of the other Thai women, as if wondering they could have made a better deal. I also needed to bring the girls back to the hotel, and even raise the doubt if they were coming back, as if the men had been conned.

I decided the end the story on the bus, because after that it would all be a little too predictable. Later, I plan to explore what all does happen to the typical Westerner, who for the first time, feels what it’s like walking into a bar and how all the girls turn to look at you and hope you’ll choose them. Plus the obvious downsides, from health risks, sexual exploitation, and the stupid decisions some people make, even killing themselves, when it all goes wrong! But for now, for this story, I wanted to capture merely the financial (and mental) transactions being made by these two men in Thailand.

For the MPH Lovers and Strangers Revisited, I made mostly minor changes, though I did delete the final line of the story since I thought it was clearly implied: “For now, that was all they wanted.” So now the story (as does the collection) ends:

The bus jerked as it pulled away, taking the two men and their companions on their journey. In no time, Noi and Mi Lai got the two men giggling as if they were back in high school with their whole lives ahead of them.

"Transactions in Thai" has now been translated into French as "Escapade en Thaïlande". Here's a link to the first translated page (and a contact for the rest of the story in French, which is free) In fact Lovers and Strangers Revisited is now getting translated into French as Trois autres Malaisie. Here's a link to the French blog set up by the publisher Éditions GOPE.

Here is a review of Lovers and Strangers Revisited: The Star (MPH) and a link to the other story behind the stories for Lovers and Strangers Revisited.

*Update, the 20^th anniversary of Lovers and Strangers Revisited

Here are links to some of my author-to-author interviews of first novelists:

Ivy Ngeow author of Cry of the Flying Rhino, winner of the 2016 Proverse Prize.

Golda Mowe author of Iban Dream and Iban Journey.

Preeta Samarasan author of Evening is the Whole Day. 

Chuah Guat Eng,  author of Echoes of Silence and Days of Change. 

Plus:

Five part Maugham and Me series

Beheaded on Road to Nationhood: Sarawak Reclaimed—Part I