tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7010953641145956608.post4823100853584519674..comments2024-01-18T05:08:18.454-08:00Comments on Borneo Expat Writer: A Perfect Day for an Expat Exit—Round Two of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel AwardsBorneo Expat Writerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15657806224924444058noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7010953641145956608.post-90854271615681150912014-03-20T23:00:13.929-07:002014-03-20T23:00:13.929-07:00Thanks. Adding that quote from the novel at the be...Thanks. Adding that quote from the novel at the beginning of the pitch helped. I inserted it into the first page of the novel too when I refocused the novel in 2012 to indicate that it's about the expat Michael Graver, who doesn't get introduced until several chapters later. The actual quote in the novel is about two-thirds of the way through.Borneo Expat Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15657806224924444058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7010953641145956608.post-43275388746920430932014-03-20T22:27:33.528-07:002014-03-20T22:27:33.528-07:00Congrats.The 300 word pitch makes me want to read ...Congrats.The 300 word pitch makes me want to read more. sintaicharleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11868981642239038913noreply@blogger.com